Chapter 4

Charles

Charles lay on his back beneath the car, arms stretched above him, wrench slipping against rusted bolts as he worked the transmission loose. Grease streaked his forearms. Sweat rolled into his ears. He’d found the replacement transmission at a parts yard for cheap. Cheap meant work.

“Charles, are you done yet?” Melanie called from inside the trailer.

Silence.

“Charles! Are you done yet?”

He shut his eyes for half a second.

“No! I’m not done yet! I’m replacing a transmission! Do you know how long that takes?”

The words came out hotter than he meant them to. He exhaled hard and slid halfway out from under the car.

“Why, baby? What’s going on? You need something? You wanna go somewhere?”

Even trying to soften his voice, it still carried edge. A pause.

“I want to go to my mom’s,” Melanie said sharply.

Charles wiped his hands on a rag. “Baby … the car can barely make it to the store. How are we supposed to drive to your parents’ place?”

The timing couldn’t have been worse. She hadn’t seen her family in weeks. He’d been working long shifts. Today just happened to be the day the transmission finally gave up.

Melanie went back inside without another word.

Charles stared up at the underside of the car. “I don’t get how it got this bad,” he muttered. “We took care of it.”

Footsteps approached.

Three men from the trailer park wandered up, watching him work. Skinny. Hollow-eyed. Jerseys hanging low. Pants sagging. One covered in tattoos from neck to knuckles. Another flashing gold teeth every time he grinned. The third just swayed slightly, scratching his jaw.

“Hey, man,” Charles said, sliding out. “I could use a hand holding this in place if y’all don’t mind.”

“Bro, I don’t know nothing about cars,” J said, rocking back on his heels.

“Yeah,” Slick Pete added, laughing. “Unless you baggin’ and sellin’, I ain’t your guy.”

The third guy just snorted. Charles didn’t comment on their appearance. He knew where he lived. Didn’t like it — but he knew it. He slid back under the car and kept working.

Melanie stepped outside again. The three men fell silent. They looked at her. Too long. She felt it instantly and stepped back inside without saying a word.

“Yo,” J muttered, low but not low enough. “You hittin’ that?”

The other two made hush gestures. Too late. Charles slid out slowly this time. His face was calm. Too calm. He walked up to them without raising his voice.

“So what?” J said, puffing his chest. “Yeah. I said it.”

He spread his arms as if he wanted a show.

Charles’ fist moved once. The crack of bone on bone echoed across the lot. J hit the ground clutching his nose, blood spilling between his fingers. The other two backed up immediately and walked off without a word.

“Get off my property line,” Charles said evenly. “Before I give you a reason to cry.”

J scrambled up and staggered away. Charles walked inside and shut the door.

“It’s fine,” he told Melanie. “They won’t bother you again.”

She looked past him at the blood on the concrete.

“What did you do?”

“He ran his mouth.”

“Charles, we cannot afford trouble here.”

They watched through the blinds as J disappeared down the row of trailers.

“He’s drunk. Or high,” Charles said dismissively. “It’s over.”

He believed that.

An hour later, the transmission still wouldn’t seat properly.

“Man, this is stupid,” Charles snapped.

A wrench clattered across the concrete. Then another. He slammed his fist into the side of the car. Metal dented.

“Stop breaking it more than it already is!” Melanie yelled from the doorway. “What is wrong with you?”

He shot her a look sharp enough to cut.

“Go inside. I’ve got it.”

“Just call my dad!”

“I don’t need help!”

His voice echoed across the trailer park. Doors cracked open. Neighbours stared.

“Mind your own business!” Charles shouted.

He stood there, breathing hard, chest rising and falling.

Charles had always struggled with his temper. Sometimes he’d even enjoyed a fight — until he went too far. He was five-foot-eight, compact and strong, and worked out regularly. He’d done time working inside prisons. Fighting didn’t scare him.

Losing control did.

He looked around at the eyes watching him and forced himself to breathe.

Then he went back under the car.

“Charles!” Melanie called again.

He ignored her.

“Charles!”

His jaw tightened.

“Charles Atkins, quit ignoring me!”

He slid halfway out, face flushed.

“What could you possibly need right now? Can’t you see I’m busy?”

Her expression hardened. She slammed the door. Thirty minutes passed in silence. Under the car, Charles’ anger cooled into something heavier — guilt. He wasn’t mad at her. He was mad at everything.

The trailer park. The busted car. The money. The feeling of being stuck.

He walked inside slowly. His face said an apology before his mouth did.

“Baby, I’m—”

“Shut up,” she snapped.

It stung.

He swallowed his reaction. Bit the inside of his lip. Forced the anger back down.

Later, he tried again.

“Mel … I’m sorry. For real.”

She looked tired more than angry now.

“You have got to control your temper,” she hissed. “I love you. But you can’t keep talking to me like that.”

He lifted his hands slightly in surrender.

“I know. You’re right. I’m trying.”

She studied his face to see if he meant it.

“Okay,” she breathed.

That night, cartoons played for their son while Melanie cooked. Charles sat on the floor, pushing toy cars back and forth, making engine noises that made the boy laugh. For a little while, things felt normal.

At nine, Melanie switched the TV to the news.

“Baby … the news is always so negative,” Charles said carefully.

“I want to watch it,” she replied, not looking at him.

He waited. She sighed, then changed it back to cartoons. A small truce.

Later, as the night settled in around the trailer park, the Atkinsons sat together on the couch. Not perfect. Not peaceful. But together. Outside, somewhere in the dark, tension lingered — quiet and waiting.

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